tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2652084046212635787.post1942998387043695542..comments2010-06-07T22:57:32.203-04:00Comments on Design Smog: Rough Idea for a Computer Concept (China)Nick Rudemillerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10380788547664116210noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2652084046212635787.post-36348993590570232102009-02-09T14:18:00.000-05:002009-02-09T14:18:00.000-05:00Nice work, I think you're on a path towards develo...Nice work, I think you're on a path towards developing a clean, easy to digest story. One thing I realize by seeing your image is that context will be very important. For instance, the new CPU format doesn't have a home next to the traditional keyboard and monitor. Similarly, showing the monitor in this traditional format does little to help tell the story that this can go anywhere. Think about layout and this might help give you some more ideas, or a stronger story.Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08706666456859467927noreply@blogger.com